Thursday, April 28, 2005

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3 comments:

Sheece said...

i am honoured that my humble poem could invoke such a beautiful comment...

Ashok said...

Hey Sheece
I like the way you experiment; both in form and verse.

R. said...

loved it! Couldn't get it at the first go..had to just ease into it!